Francis Michael Buck

Thanks for letting me know about that. I already posted it there. If someone wants to close this they can go ahead. Also, does anyone know of a good way ...

I like it a lot! Good word choices, and a unique idea. Keep posting stuff, I want to see more of your work.

Thanks for reading guys, glad everyone liked it! I always appreciate it when people take the time to review. Out of curiosity did anyone happen to check out the song ...

His teeth upon your throat His claws upon your breast I get all the diction that you try and use with this piece, and it makes it all the better, ...

Thanks for the review, I appreciate anyone who reads it. I can't say I totally agree about your comments on the formality of it. In my opinion formality is pretty ...

Hey, thanks for the comments! Hah, I'm surprised anyone noticed I had been gone. I thought I was kind of a lurker around here. Glad you liked poem though. It's ...

Thanks for reading, glad you liked it! And yeah, the title doesn't really mean anything in particularly, just a word I made up that the tone of the poem (in ...

That format is way easier to read! I can read it now, and interpet it. First: this should be rated at least PG 13 due to the sexual references. So ...

Before I review this at all, is this supposed to be the opening of the story?

I know what you mean. I was between two ways of formatting, but I was having trouble deciding which worked better. It's an conventional style and there's no real pattern ...

I actually liked the starting with "Yet I feel", it gives it an interesting...feel. But yeah I like it, it's deep and could be interpreted in different ways, and those ...

Yeah, the whole thing definitely needs a revision, it was just a quick school project that I thought turned out pretty cool. Sometime when I need a break from my ...

Yeah I suppose so. It reads quickly because it's a script, but still I guess people aren't interested in investing that much time.

Jeez, no replies at all? Someone comment please! I want to know what other people think of this.

I think another important thing to note about this story is that everything Metatron says is his OWN PREDICTION. It's not stuff that has or will happened, but just what ...